以下是一封开发信的例子:
Dear Mr . Steven Hans ,
We get your name and email address from your trade lead on www.tradelead.com that you are in the market for ball pen . We would like to introduce our company and products , hope that we may build business cooperation in the future .
We are factory specializing in the manufacture and export of ball pen for more than six years . We have profuse designs with series quality grade , and expressly , our price is very competitive because we are manufactory , we are the source . You are welcome to visit our website http://www.aaa.com which includes our company profiles , history and something latest designs .
Should any of these items be of interest to you , please let us know . We will be happy to give you details .
As a very active manufactures , we develop new designs nearly every month . If you have interest in it , it ' s my pleasure to offer news to you regular .
Best regards ,
Dafu Wong
请注意这封开发信的写法。作为初次联系的信件,它简洁明了,鲜明地展示了自己的特点:工厂、款式多、价格有竞争力,并暗示建议客户绕开中间商直接跟厂家合作。因为不知道客户的详情,特别强调有多种品质,这样无论对方是精品路线还是廉价路线,都有洽谈的空间。
此外,并没有谈论太深,而是引导客户去访问自己的网站。最后再抛出诱饵,以不断提供新款设计信息为由吸引客户回复,而客户一旦回复,就极可能确认了应该联系的人——要知道,你原先获得的名称地址很可能只是个打字员的。
这样的开发信,再随附一张展现琳琅满目款式的产品照片,效果会很不错的。
当然,开发信要自己写,而不要抄书上或者网上那种固定的范文。古板雷同的文字只会让客户反感。况且产品种类不同,写法也不一样。工艺品和日用消费品、时尚产品等不妨轻松活泼,而如果你卖的是阀门,那么还是严谨专业些比较好。
此外,开发信不同于Trade Lead,为表示诚意,不宜千篇一律,应该根据客户的规模、国籍不同略作调整,在信件中适合的地方自然地点一下客户的公司名字,暗示这封开发信是专门诚意写给贵公司的,而不是草率地广告。这些小技巧虽然不起眼,但颇能给客户以好感。
记住,能吸引客户回复的开发信,才是成功的开发信。
开发信,可以用传真的形式,但目前更多的是采用电子邮件方式。